Rate the collab - Turk Cobain (aka Tha Prince) & M. Thought?

Question

Something Turk Cobain (aka Tha Prince) and me did, since a lot of my other questions about the Y!A collab were reported. It was turned into a two person collab. Sorry for all the people would were willing to jump on, I might try it again later on.

Instrumental:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=21_iKWr0p5I

Tha Prince:
I’m in the upper echelon of the section
Session starts when I segregate my thoughts like I’m Escher
And the thoughts integrate, and then evolve into compression
Freshened like a spit shine mixed with lyrical finesse
Steadily build up the pressure, like it was a LEGO set
Or that check that’s past due that you ain’t pay off yet
I’m the landlord, eviction is eminent when I finish
Dismember my foes, devour, and clean the dinner set
Never been a pet doctor, but I been a vet
I’m going on 4 years and don’t plan to finish yet
My recurrence is a burden to some
In mental tug of war, too strong , I’m certain I’ve won
My every bar is vehement, got a turbulent tongue
God gave this gift, I guess I’m the murderous son
But I rid of the pests, hard work, sit at my desk
And type rhymes, decide whether to uplift or deject
Either way I excite, and you see my greatness reflect
We sparking up the section, tryna make the cables connect
We just soldiers on a broadband war field
When in mass attack, they picking me like slaves in a corn field
The same veins of the slaves are engraved and paired
Unleash flames, verbal undertaker, ya grave prepared

M. Thought:
I speak words worse for IQs, I won’t Dumb It Down for nothing
I go East… and bite through the Love Locked Down for something
I destroy cats, hit them in the back with child toy bats
Literal transformer give me a sentence and I’ll form that
Born back 93 till infinity, I play man’s worse enemy
And rearrange like flowers, every dead corpse sent to me
I can rhyme clean, or a bit Nasty like I was God’s Son
I open the third eye to thoughts and block none
If any lyricist beats me in a battle, that’s delirious
I make p*ssies bleed like they have a period
Driving like Vin in the first Fast and Furious
Any rapper today knows my attack and fearing it
My style stays ageless like a verbal Dorian Gray
When on stage my words are forced in the state
I gave birth to a monster cause the abortion was late
I forced in the tape till this was worded as fate
My burden is great but I feel safe as a letterhead
Don’t worry, I’m the better rapper and you’re better dead
Rap’s in it’s dark ages and I have the light like Edison
I’m so sick when I rhyme that I might try medicine
Nah… hellhounds try bite mine, but I’m heaven sent
Think you’re Jesus? On the seventh day you’ll be dead again

Answer 1

Nice verse Morbo, but, child toy bats? lol

Answer 2

I enjoyed countless the punches, yet i've got faith such as you like greater ideal multis for this style of music...Tha Prince became good, yet M.theory could have stepped it up slightly... having suggested that, recorded, it could sound great-dope, so i might unquestionably desire to pay attention some thing!

Answer 3

I liked some of the punches, but I feel like you need stronger multis for this type of track...Tha Prince was good, but M.Thought could have stepped it up a bit...





Then again, recorded, it could sound super-dope, so I would definitely like to hear something!

Answer 4

Count me in if your doing another collab ok?



dont count me out cause im just a gray smiley face



and u have the better verse

Answer 5

I don't usually like punchlines...unless they're good,and these were sick.dissapointed that all of us couldn't join in,but it's still cool to see some results,and you both did great.

Answer 6

lol WTF are you 2 on punchline steriods?



This is a dope collab but I'd want to hear it on audio.