A check out my new song im only thirteen so dont be suprised?

Question

girl you been runnin on my mind
i just cant keep u oof my sight
im gonna love you until tonight
i know we dont belong and its hard to be together
ignore all bad comments just say whatever
my head says no
but my heart says go
all i think bout is u when i walk out the door
please forgive me babe didnt mean to do wrong
none of them know that our relationship is very strong
im head over heels for u gurl and u know that
i just way u felt the same way back
we knew eachother since we were so small
dont be like that make our love fall
never cheated on u and u know it gurl
your so special to me you make my head twirl
didnt know what i was gonna do when i lost you babe
im still asking for forgivness until today
all i think is that i need to make it all good
i hope u hear this song and hope that u understood
that what i did was wrong an you are all i need
so gurl forgive me please
i tried and tried to make it up but there aint nothing else to do
im sorry gurl i love u

Answer 1

that is very nice. it explains a story which i like in a song. it shows that you are a man and realise you are wrong. your interpretation of love may change over time but this is how you feel about it now and this song is evidence of that.

Answer 2

Sounds sturdy, yet i'm with chasity - what are you asking forgiveness for? you're saying you probably did some thing incorrect (two times), yet i can not determine it out. And why could you in basic terms love her "until this night"? That does no longer seem to electrify the extra youthful woman. ordinary, it somewhat is powerful; it only desires a touch sharpening. sturdy success with all of it.

Answer 3

A 13 year old talking about love. Interesting.

Answer 4

Thats beautiful darling. hope it wins ya girl back!

Answer 5

It's awezome. i think you should get it produced or something. just adda chorus.