Ok i was 12 when i wrote this?

Question

I lived in gary indiana and gangs were my only option, i turned away but people still thought of me as a LGD. (latin gangsta disciple)

I wrote this when i was 11 or 12 i think twelve.










abtain a path of desire, turn from inner path of crue, triupmh the past livin in new, taste of fear, seasons of sacrifices, a lyrical equation of murderous strifes, I inhale the past, but exhale the future, we exell the future, i am the future, you are the future, we are the future. We outlived 25, a bullet passin thru every street, we got by, then came da 3 gods, anti latinos haled tha almighty kkings. Who were rivals against the bloodz means, we were in the middle us disciples we got thru n made it out, brothas bodies lie amist from the devils grip, we are pissed, death was on our territory, hell was sure manditory, but nevertheless i made it past through the bloody days, i live new, i am the future, you are the future, We are the future. now bloody dayz are just good ol memories, from the midwest, G.I., Chi-town, Hammond, E.C. i still remember the past of my titles, a thug, a loner in stifle, a son of god, and a G.I. Disciple.



do you think i can fix it up and make it better??
lol dont laught i was young btw

Answer 1

You were talented at that age Tight **** no needed fix or flips

Answer 2

I read wrong,i thought you said India,i was like WOAH thats cool.

Nevertheless,it was good

Answer 3

WOW! you must have been better then than you are now little Johnny! LMAO!!!

Answer 4

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G